Angels From Heaven

Angels From Heaven is a poem of inspiration

Angels from Heaven fallow ye every where, protecting God's children from harm. He is rich in love,grace and mercy, clothing us in His armour. No matter what happends in life, when it feels like broken glass under our feet, God lifts our heads, giveth us strength to endure to the end. His love endures for ever we sing unto He, Holy Holy Holy Lord God almighty, we Bow at His throne. Praising Him Worshipping Him for ever and ever. Adoration we shall give him even in times of trial. That why He sends the Angels from Heaven to fight the battles or us.  

Reviews

[heido]

Good idea's.
Badly written.
Research the style your trying to emulate, you can improve this, and it could be quite enlightening.

[Onatah]

Always give thanks for your guardian angels. Well done!