Dream Sequence Number Five

as it says! :)

(I'll let you in on a secret)

I dreamt of you next to me

Lying there so I could kiss you

Straight brown hair covering one eye

Snoring like a single air plane trail in the sky


Just the same sound repeating over and over

(but I didn't mind)


.dragging the ether to my four covered enclosure.

A rush of excitement

To the head

Ran straight through me

Like a spirit

Head to toe


A shiver

Reviews

[Bubo]

This is lovely..........captures a special thought and moment........great imagary and loved the lines

dragging the ether to my four covered enclosure.

A rush of excitement

To the head

Ran straight through me

Like a spirit


Superb!

[Impulse]

You manage to say a lot in a pretty short poem. Nice.