dying without a tear

Clenching a knife in my fist,

taking the blade down my wrist

seeing the blood stain the my floor,

from the skin thats being torn

whats the point of keeping my life,

when my only friend is this knife

begining to feel numb without any pian,

my life was just a stupid game

Author's Note

written 11/02/2006

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

so glad you're not living this way anymore, it's a sad existence. Excellent piece....which is why I have to point out a few typos cuz they take away from this:
seeing the blood stain the my floor (the or my)
begining to feel numb without any pian (pain)

It's amazing how far we'll go not to feel when the feelings are so bad. I know how you felt when you wrote this, as you know from reading my work. It's short, simple, to the point, and pardon my pun...but it cuts like a knife. Excellent piece!!

[Kaelani]

wow yea this is one of ur old ones but i 4got it was this good! its the shiznickle!!

[chris]

bunni please dont think like that anymore

[Courtney]

and thats about how i feel right now..