no matter what

For Chris Torres

No matter what happens,

i will always be there for you

even if we eventually go our seperate ways,

i will always be there for you

even if one day you start to treat me like im nothing,

i will always be there for you

even if one day you become deathly ill,

i will always be there for you

if one day you find someone new...

I will still be there for you

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

awww.. this was sooo sweet!!! i'm sure chris feels really loved!!!! i wish someone loved me like that...

nice job!

~may

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Loyalty is beautiful thing. True love does forgive even thought new boundaries are set. You made devotion clear.

[Sarah]

This is really sweet, and captures the complete and utter devotion that we have for someone that we really care about. It gets to the point where we love them so much, that they can do no wrong, even if it means going off with someone else. Great job! (:

[Kaelani]

that was really good dana i loved it!!

Aww that's sweet!

[Kat_apult]

Ah, how beautiful...to know that the love for someone still continues even after the relationship is over...love in its purest form! I love the repetition of "i will still be there for you" it really gives the poem a lot more power, emotion and feeling because of it! Great job. :)

[chris]

thank you bunni i love you so much!!!

[Kitty]

True love conquers all. A beautifully written poem filled with that true, pure love. It's always nice to have someone to feel like that about.

Great poem!

Josie

[Miss Mary Jane]

I think that this piece captures what true admiration.

[Nocturnal illusion]

Very well written...I have once been here wih one of my ex's....and yet I am still there for her when she needs me....very good point