Broken

He's my still when it's stormy
My storm when it's too still
My rock in the midst of my madness
The light in my darkness
Perhaps more broken than I was
With his broken body and soul
He fixed me
Till I could stand back up
And fix him

Reviews

[Emosawa]

I like the happy ending, or at least that's the way I imagine it to be. Good writing and I like the rhythm in the last three lines.

[dananegal]

Thank you so much!

[dananegal]

I would love to hear your reviews and criticisms.