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A Poem by Jane Olivia Davis
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adoration
becomes
calmness
destiny
exists
finally
gently
hesychastic
innately
just
keep
loving
my
naked
only
perfect
quiet
romance
silken
thighs
under
violet
waves
xanthoderm
yawning
zabuton

© 2011 Jane Olivia Davis


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This is really amazing. I try to do little pieces like this for fun, and always fail miserably. You make it look so easy. You have talent; you have to know that. I would only suggest changing the title. Give it some enigmatic or esoteric title having nothing to do with the alphabet and see if readers can guess at the structure. Just my little suggestion, fine writer.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Jane Olivia Davis
Jane Olivia Davis

home sweet home, AL



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i am just an average girl, living a beautiful sweet little life with a beautiful sweet little wife. she is my muse, even though she is more brilliant than i could ever hope to be. intimidated by the.. more..

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