yours...

because...you know why

it

is

nights

like

this

where

i

remember

how

and

why

we

fell

in

love

...

most

importantly

how

i

fell

in

love

with

you

.

simple

.

honest

.

sure

.

the

truth

became

us

as

we

became

us

and

we

became

we

.

 

Reviews

[Libby McKeown]

I like your work, especially when read aloud. It has greater depth and flair, and it reads like something only a woman could convincingly speak aloud. I love the last stanza; it completely refashions the old cliche of "us" into something beautifull in its simplicity. Like the sky before a storm. Every one has seen that before, but we all stop and admire it every time we see it. Technically, this piece is very good, in my humble estimation. Keep singing. . .

[Libby McKeown]

:)