yellow...

once...remember when?

the

next

time

we

are

surrounded

by

yellow

and

you

want

to

make

love

to

me

it

will

be

in

my

bed

Author's Note

five...

Reviews

[Libby McKeown]

Yellow is interesting indeed, and a powerful centerpiece to the poem. It's the backdrop invoked in the reader's mind while reading this, and yellow is full of subconscious symbolism. Wonderful work, gifted writer! I envy your talent.

[alesuriko]

Well it's short and brief and honest. Not quite a poem per se but it's interestingly simple. It has a lot of potential because I already find it rather intriguing with the yellow and what it could mean.