catch....

for the times...and times to come

kiss me once for every star

   you have ever bestowed a

     wish

 

touch my face for every second

  you have ever felt

     alone

 

take a breath from me for every time

   you have ever wanted it to be your

      last

 

share a dream for every one

  you have ever had to let

      go

 

hold me tightly for every chance

  you have wanted badly and

     lost

 

know that for every soul

  you have ever fallen through mine will

     catch

Author's Note

number four...

Reviews

[mope]

For every view this has
it deserves a re-view

[alesuriko]

This is very nice. The rhythm and the pattern are beautiful and it flows so wonderfully. Very emotive and sweet. Well done.

[AK]

Ohhh... I like this! Especially, "touch my face for every second you have ever felt alone". Very nice line. The overall feeling of the piece is really, really nice.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very good. Each set of line adding up to a beautiful ending. I like the set-up and the kind and gentle emotion. A outstanding poem.
Coyote