patiently...

patiently...

A Poem by Jane Olivia Davis
"

waiting for you...but you never came back

"
sitting here,
music playing softly, trying to listen, not really listening.
my heart beats slowly, filling me with the loneliness
  of the emptiness in the sound
desperate for you
longing for you
crying now,
  thoughts of you filling me with the endless feeling of
  being lost without you
i close my eyes to see your face,
memories of you become reflections in my tears
your voice echoes through me with every breath i take
music playing softly, listening now without trying,
  drowning out the loneliness in my heartbeat,
   filling my soul with the meaning behind the words that remind me of you
missing you,
  i brush the tears away and smile to myself
waiting here,
   my body filling with desire at the thought of your touch, burning for you,
   aching for you,
patiently,
i love you  
 
 and still, the music plays softly...
but i'm not really listening

© 2010 Jane Olivia Davis


Author's Note

Jane Olivia Davis
second submission...again be kind :)

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Poem is beautiful. I dislike waiting for anyone. Time seem to go on forever. The kind words and sweet emotion made poem very good. A very good ending to a poem of desire and waiting for someone. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jane Olivia Davis
Jane Olivia Davis

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