Come for a Visit

Pictures on the wall,

banging to a beat.

Rugs rolling and unrolling,

fringes nipping at your feet.

Windows open wide,

then close you up inside.

You shouldn't come to visit,

but I promise if you don't you'll miss it...

Come in I'll take your jacket,

and toss it on the hatchet.

Have a cup of tea,

and you won't want to flee.

My cozy home houses only one,

but I'll let you stay with me.

I'll make you stay with me.

Reviews

[Kreative Kana]

The last sentence sent chills down my spine!! "I'll make you stay with me." No!!! :) Good job; I like the rhyming. Keep it up!

[Dana Ferguson]

Thank you! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Have a cup of tea,
and you won't want to flee.
My cozy home houses only one,
but I'll let you stay with me.
I'll make you stay with me."

An invitation with an affirmation. I like where you went with this. Bravo..................

[Dana Ferguson]

Thank you so much for the compliment and for taking the time to read it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.