Unnoticed

If you ever feel unimportant in this world, set a goal for yourself and don't let anything stop you from achieving it.

It's okay that I go unnoticed

It puts me down sometimes

But I just don't show it

I try and make the best of my situation

But I'm alone most of the time

left without any motivation

It's okay that I go unnoticed

I'm waiting for an opportunity

And I hope I don't blow it

I've got no reason to slow down now

I'm just getting started

and my feet are still on the ground

It's time to get up and make a change

It's time to leave my mark on this earth like an artist on a train

Yeah it's okay that I go unnoticed

I've got my mind set straight

Nothing can cloud my focus

-Danny Dieckmann

Reviews

[ravencassidy]

Really awesome poem, loved it. Would actually make a great saying on a poster!!!!

[Frederick Titus]

Powerful and I enjoy the repetition. This is just a personal thing, but I enjoy lots of description in my stories. I do not know exactly how you could add it in, but that is the difficult part hahaha. Overall good job.