I didn't get a chance to say goodbye

I didn't get a chance to say goodbye

A Poem by dan

 I didn't get a chance to say goodbye
To you, to tell you that I loved you, to say
What now must be one long, unbroken cry
Of pain, now that at last you've gone away.
I cannot tell you what a joy it was
To be the one to tend you in your need.
The burden was a gift, for giving does
Not burden one who loves, though loving bleed.
I wish I could have been with you when you,
Perhaps aware, perhaps not, turned towards death
Alone, with no one there to wonder to,
To share your fear, your hand, your one last breath.
I wish, I wish, I wish . . . but it is done,
And now I must surrender what is gone.

© 2010 dan


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This is so full of sadness and clearly points to a broken heart. It's very well written my friend. Great poem, sorry for loss.
Thanks for share.
Babs xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is really good. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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dan
dan

devon, United Kingdom



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i'm am 20, i like to write poems about different things i have done and seen. i will like to meet people with the same interrests. more..

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