A Special World

A Special World

A Poem by dan
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About love

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A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.

© 2010 dan


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This is beautiful and totally comprehendable. It's written with such love and passion to create a piece that you sould be proud of, as should the person you wrote it for.
Thanks for share
Babs xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this piece because to me it explains a relationship from beginning without end. Beautify written, nice work
Mauricio


Posted 14 Years Ago


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Joe
This is good. Great rhythm and rhyme help it flow nicely. Great job! Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 28, 2010
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dan
dan

devon, United Kingdom



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i'm am 20, i like to write poems about different things i have done and seen. i will like to meet people with the same interrests. more..

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