Kissing

Kissing

A Poem by Dana

Another form of communication, so special

I remember music playing

This vibration, imitating rhythm

it feels so good, so just carry on kissing

I'm feeling buzzy, my body too

I always want more,

this positive belief that kissing is good for me.

I see you, and we're at it again and again.

Nothing can stop us,

no hesitation, nor limitations.

We never run out of batteries,

continuation is bliss,

In this mad rush that time is running out,

but we carry on, as if there are no distractions,

Only the world of moistness,

entering each other in this way.

It tastes of honey, you!

Honey you cannot find in shops

The bees know of this honey,

but they don't make it.

It's the honey you make when i'm with you,

we make it together.

I miss the taste of honey.

I crave it when i'm not with you.

I try to substitute the sweetness with food, but it is not the same.

Continual mental and physical stimulation- I desire both from you!

Letting myself go with you, with this flow of the moment.

I dream with this sense of moistness revolving over me like the tides of the sea,

covering me in sweet honey.

There is sweet joy in honey..

Why stop now?

I need continuity..

Expression through honey..

I love honey

Milky white, tastes of wild blue berries glowing in the sunset.

To me, they will always taste of your mouth on mine.

Spectacular and delicious, all the flavours based on what I feed you.

Touching and sensuous.

Insensitivity does not hope to imagine what improvised expressionism feels like.

Tell me what it is like for you,
using descriptive expressions and idiosyncratic idioms.

 

By Dana Lazar

 

 

© 2008 Dana


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JRB
sweet and thoughtful, nice write thank you,
Jan/uisiom

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautifully worded, thought out, adn structured. Awsome work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Truly the most thorough workup of a kiss that I've ever read. Nice...all the way through.

Very good work...


Daniel

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I have come back to writing after a very long break, and look forward to writing and reading some creative expression. I love doing this, it's so freeing to be able to express oneself in this manner. .. more..

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