Sensuality

Sensuality

A Poem by Dana

It is more than a feeling, it is intangible in words.

I will lose the essence, this breathless serenity.

The excitement and integretion.

It is subtle, yet powerful.

Primitive in longing, yet torturous..

Because it is in the mind, and so the mind plays on..

Hungry for stimulus, it is playful, wishing, longing

A glimpse of what could be.

 

By Dana Lazar

 

She smiled when he first looked at her,

wondering what he would do.

His hot breath on her body, silent whispers..

Bodies melting into suculence,

merging in swirling passions.

 

By Yossi

 

 

It is a delicacy,

A delicacy you can have every night,

just follow me-

Im atuned, just hearing you whisper

I'm aglow with satisfaction

Your body against mine

Your delicious scent

The agony that you're not here. I am alone again.

Your memory stirs a silent lingering thrill.

 

By Dana Lazar

 

© 2008 Dana


Author's Note

Dana
Experimental sensuality

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there is only one word for this writing: beautiful.

~K. N. Graf

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely Dana , Its so beautifully edited , you make me alive with your writing , you make me feel .Yos

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


...stirs a silent lingering thrill...

Excellently penned, gently enchanting. A truly credible representation in a nice, poetic form.

Good work...!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your experiment worked.

You have created something sensual that embodies the beauty of human contact while embracing the spirit. I applaud your words for they are raindrops from heaven that caress the reader.

Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was good, I'm inspired to write a poem of a comment here...May I.

Art

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 7, 2008

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Dana
Dana

London, United Kingdom



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I have come back to writing after a very long break, and look forward to writing and reading some creative expression. I love doing this, it's so freeing to be able to express oneself in this manner. .. more..

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