Tormented

Tormented

A Poem by Dana

These ominous choices

Bewildering voices

Torment my inner soul of wishful thinking

This peace that lies within

Needs a voice, no choice

but to withold, this inner desire

Until peace comes to me

 

By Dana Lazar

© 2008 Dana


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Dana
Please kindly review, as there is peace at the end

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I'm glad that peace comes at the end. The voices are filled with distraction and it feels like unravelling a plate of spaghetti. I like the way the peace described feels like an oasis... a garden which appears, fresh and free of confusion.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hope you will find the peace for your soul soon , the restless storm in our hearts always looking for a better days, to relax, to be able to look up to the sky , feel the garss under our head, blink to the wind, smile and sleep , Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 3, 2008
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