Love

My own version of love

This is something magical, wild and true

I truly believe you now

I can see, smell and touch you

You are an enlightened being

The one my heart desires

Like the wings of a butterfly

You're here for the breath of a moment, then disappear

but always to return, because

I am your personal flower

I am free to fly with you,

and you with me

This is the way of Love

 

By Dana Lazar

Author's Note

It's unedited, but I like it that way, this piece is free to breath on it's own

Reviews

[Andrew Dunham]

Very easy-breathing and open. I like the way it always feels like it's your own vaster self that has been encountered. It has been there all along, watching and waiting, guiding. I always wanted to get a T shirt printed up with the words "You are the one you've been waiting for". Seems to take care of a lot of the human predicament, brings it all back to the one who is experiencing the thought. Nice butterfly wings. xx

[Nely Amorim]

it's beautiful and needs no editing in my opinion (unless i missed some typos)..lol and truly a wonderful way to encapture love. thank you for sharing:)

[bluessadmood]

oh yes i like this version of love ,you see it great he comes to you and flies and always come back like its really home and it feels great,yes you are truely in love and you show it clearly ,wonderful words

[Michael X]

Romantic and lovely, the flowing sensuousness is artistic and lulling.
as well as Beautiful, metaphysical and moving- with lighthearted feature.
Thanks for sharing your talent.

[Chahklat]

"I am your personal flower" - Very creative, imaginative. This poem is quite light and refreshing.

[MagicHearted Knight]

Very imaginative, you defiantly have a very unique flow to your work.

[Tammy]

I enjoyed this piece..

Tammy

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

wonderful poems, I loved it, that remind me my first ever poem ... "Fly" you can take a look if you like , I love the fly , the movment of lover around his flower, take sips of smell, and move on :) .... Thanks for sharing and good luck on the Cafe Yossi