My love

Honey bedroom voice,
Glowing amber face,
Olympian goddess shape,
Forbidden red apple lips to taste.
Her enchantment I can not escape,
Nothing about this woman's spell is fake, 
It's a dream for the awake.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Nice inner couplet on lines 2 & 3...to contrast the rhyme scheme. For the ladies around the way. Nice.

[Ivory]

Very romantic piece.
My favorite line, " Her enchantment I can not escape "
I love short pieces that hold a lot of emotion and meaning.

[King Author]

thanks check out her day, one of my other poems of love, i think one of my best pieces..