Uncertainty

Lost in my own emotions, I'm unsure of how to feel

Things are so overwhelming, please tell me it's not real

Sometimes I want to leave, just run away from it all

I need someone to save me, catch me before I fall

I used to be so smart, I never used to lie

I never used to let, anyone see me cry

What happened to the girl, I know I used to be?

The happy, carefree girl that people used to see

I miss the way things were, before she ran away

Cause I learned the hard way, that no one's here to stay...

Reviews

[Aurora]

You know... I really liked this a lot.
I hate how I can't be who I used to be. I was just talking to my friend about that.

So innocent and carefree and trusting.. I miss it so much.
But people have to grow up, people have to change.
If you don't like the person you are now, try to be better. You can never go back to the past, so just strive for better.

I really like this poem. I know I said that already. It was really well written, although there were some punctuation mistakes and such.

[Pitta S Dev]

its a good expressive poem. language is apt.

[Sincerely, Alex]

I like this.
Relateable and honest.

Good write.

Alex

[H]

I see a lot of your poems have to do with the change and disappointment in your life. It makes one wonder what you've been through.

[Alexander Z. Anthony]

Very nice. I liked it.
Sometimes people complain about a forthright rhyming scheme, but I lvoe them!
Simplicity for the win!
Kudos, great job, I can really feel the inner dialogue and turmoil.

[UponATyme]

I can really connect personally to this poem. You really captured how hard it is to realie that you're not the same person you thought you were and that others aren't the same either.

[nostal]

I loved every single line. Great work.

[SilentDreamer]

That's sad but I love the poem. It flows perfectly and has a nice message. Awesome job!