I can't

How can I talk to him?

"You can't"

 

How can I meet him?
"You can't"

 

How can I tust him?

"You can't"

 

How can I tell him 'no'?

"You can't"

 

How can I stop him?

"You can't"

 

How can I tell him?

"You can't"

 

How can I love him?

"You can't"

 

How can I hate her?

"You can't"

 

How can I care for her?

"You can't"

 

How can I raise her?

"You can't"

 

How can I tell her?

"You can't"

 

How can I stop her?

"You can't"

 

How can I trust him?

"You can't"

 

 

 

How can I still love him?

"You can't"

Author's Note

I know the story may be hard to understand. The girl falls for a guy but her conscience tells her not to let him in her life. She does't listen and lets him have his way with her. An unexpected surprise happens to her and she wants to tell him. She can't tell him about her because she is afraid he will hurt her angel. But she still loves him. It definetly isn't my best, but I like it.

Reviews

[Lexi Richard]

I love this, it's fresh, and new, and well written.

[Nami Machae]

its a nice poem, i was able to understand the main point of what was going on. well done

[Lexi Villanueva]

Imple in a way and not to
be hurtful but I kinda
don't like this poem very
much but this is a different
plot and very werid.

[prashant harsh]

diffrent plot :)

[Rahul]

A great write of my entire life...what a nice theme, i love the package. Hey, why don't you try to write one story/book on this tittle ? i think it could be a nice story/chap.
nice;y done once again. 101/100

[Luke Rawlings]

Kudos to a good piece! Clever use of structure, I felt kinda sad by the end. Well done :)

[Simon Welsh]

I like! This is well written. Cool form.

[Haley Harrigan]

You're kidding me! This is superb! This is, by far, my favorite of your work.

[plainme]

Questions with yourself? We've all been there. A struggle of soul and body. In the 5th line, was the capital Can't intentional? If so, how come? I'm curious! This one is nice, but it makes more sense after reading the note.

[Darling Dallas]

Thank You for the review! And no, the capital Can't wasn't intentional. lol I guess i didn't notice it before i posted the poem.

[Patrick O'Neil]

Looks like a inner struggle, that focus on the fear. Fear of what could go wrong. Nicely written.