Toole City

Toole City

A Chapter by Dale
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Will and his father are in an 1880's western mining town. Will's father works in the mine, leaving Will to meet Sally and Hermit Jack

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“I’ve done it!” he shouted. “Mrs. Fraser, I’ve done it!” He looked at the distinguished gray-haired woman who cared for his son.

He turned to Will, “Son, we are going west!”

“West?”  Will questioned, “What’s west, Father?”

“It’s a second chance, my boy, a second chance.”

William Warren, Sr. had quit his job, sold the house that had once been his one and only dream, and bought land.  Land he had never seen, but nevertheless, land.  Land in Colorado.

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It was the summer of 1880, and Will stood on the boardwalk outside the general store in Toole City, Colorado, remembering his father’s excited words.  Actually, Will had not thought of anything else, since his father burst into their Wisconsin home, shouting at the top of his lungs.  Mrs. Fraser was helping with the housework while father worked.  She was in as much shock as Will was.

It now seemed like so long ago, but finally after the long stagecoach ride from Laramie, Wyoming, Will had awaken that morning, in Colorado!

Although they still had not seen the land his father purchased, Will knew they would get there... someday.

Meanwhile, he was just a curious 10-year-old boy, eager to find out everything he could about this bustling mining town.  Starting with, why was there a black and white Border collie crawling out from under his feet.

Will watched intently as the little dog wearily made his way for the dirt street.  The collie grunted, stretched his legs, sniffed the air, and began his morning rounds.

Will watched as the dog headed first, toward the bakery, for a slice of freshly baked bread.  Then, last night’s leftovers from the restaurant around the corner.  Next, the butcher shop for one or two strips of bacon.  If he found any of the wooden doors closed, he would make a soft growl, and the door would immediately open.  At each stop, he left behind a smiling, human, satisfied that he or she had done their duty for the black and white Border collie.  Finally, he would jump up on the wooden boardwalk in front of the General store. 
A sound startled Will and he turned to look behind him. A little girl come out of the store with an old tin plate.  The plate was full of water.  She placed on the wooden boardwalk.  Suddenly the black and white Border collie that Will had seen earlier bounded up next to the tin plate and started drinking. 

The little girl proudly said, “I see you've met Hermit Jack.” 

The boy looked over the collie, then said “funny name for a dog.” 

“Well.” the little girl said, “He is named for Jack Creek, south of town." she pointed. "And any loud noises scare him; he runs under the boardwalk and nearly burrows himself in a hole there.  He’ll stay for hours, just like that old hermit, up in the hills.” But I just call him Jack for short.

Both continued to watch Jack lap up the cold water, giggling as most of it got sloshed out of the plate.  Then the little girl said:

“My name is Sally, my Dad owns the store here,” as she pointed back to the building she had walked out of.  “We’ve lived here nearly six months now.  You are new here aren’t you?  You must have come in on the stage yesterday.” 

The boy was a couple of inches shorter than she was, so she looked down into his eyes impatiently waiting for a response.
      
Will caught the girl’s gaze and took a step back.  He was not really that shy, just startled by her directness.
      
“Um,” he hesitated, not sure really how much information he was ready to give out about himself, yet.  “I’m Will,” he finally answered, and decided to just leave it at that
     
Nevertheless, Sally pushed on.  “Where did you come here from?”

“Laramie,” he said.  “My Dad and I came in on the Laramie stage last night.”

“I knew that silly, but I don’t think you lived in Laramie, I think you came from somewhere else."
 
Will frowned, “Ok, this isn’t going to be easy,” he thought to himself.  “We’re from Wisconsin,” he finally stated.
 
Sally’s mouth dropped.  “Wow!  That is a long ways away.  What are you doing in Toole City?”
 
Will ignored her question and asked, “So is he your dog?” pointing at Hermit Jack.
 
Sally had lots more questions about this boy, but remembered her father’s warning that sometimes strangers do not like to talk much.  She paused, and then said,

“No, he’s not, he’s pretty much the town dog.  No one really knows where he came from, or when he arrived.  He just showed up begging for food one day, so everyone feeds him.”

Will nodded, and then a frown crept across his face as he said.  “I’m supposed to be going to school, where is it?”

Sally literally beamed as she grabbed his arm.  Despite his efforts to pry it away from her, Will found himself being drug down the boardwalk toward the end of the street.

“I’m twelve,” Sally exclaimed.  “But I’m the only twelve year old in the school, so I get to help the younger kids learn their reading and writing.  How old are you?”

It seemed impossible, but Will’s frown grew even larger as he visualized this girl helping him read and write.  “Ten,” he mumbled to himself.  “But!” he exclaimed, “I don’t need no help with readin’ and writin’” he forced a smile at Sally.  She was not detoured, still bouncing with glee, she pointed to a big red building at the top of the hill.  “There’s the schoolhouse she proudly announced.”

As the two children rounded the corner leading up the hill, Jack found himself alone.  He took one last drink of water, and then lay down in the dirt, next to the boardwalk.  His head resting on his front paws. He closed his eyes.

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Hours later, Jack heard laughter from around the corner.  His tail involuntarily thumped in the dirt. He stood up, but did not take his eyes off the corner. Then finally, children of all ages began pouring out into the streets of Toole City.  Jack was delighted.  He broke into a run, and greeted the children, with a quick lick on each of their legs.  Sally and Will simultaneously shouted, “Hi Jack!” as the dog ran in circles around them, jumping with glee.

Will heartily rubbed Jack's head, but then stopped when he heard the clickity-clack of stagecoach wheels coming from behind him. When he turned around nothing was there.  Then the dust from the street began to rise into the air, as six horses rounded a corner and stormed down Main Street.

Will’s face broke out into a smile of recognition, as the stage driver cracked his whip high above the horse’s heads.  They breezed past Will and Sally engulfing them in dust.  Will broke into a run, as he made his way past the store to the stage stop.  Staying where they were, Sally and Jack simply cocked their heads to the side in unison, as they watched.
Will made it to the stage stop, catching the stage just as a big man jumped down from the driver’s seat.  The big man’s face also broke out into a smile of recognition, as he put his huge hand on Will’s shoulder.

“Howdy, young feller!” he exclaimed

“Howdy Andy!” Will shouted back.

“How’s Toole City a-treatin’ ya, Will?"  He responded

“Ah, I’m not really likin’ it much, everything’s new." He paused, looking down at the ground. Then looked back at Andy.  "It’s good to finally see someone I already know,” he said as he extended his hand.

Andy ignored Will’s hand, and wrapped a big arm around his shoulder.  “You’ll see me every day at 4 o’clock.”  Andy untied his bright red bandana and shook it in the air.  Dust flew in every direction, prompting Will to cough.  Then Andy reached into his vest pocket and pulled out a shiny gold pocket watch.  “Ha Ha Ha”, he added with a grin, “Oops… guess some days it’s a little after 4 o’clock."

Then Andy opened the coach door and out stepped the mine superintendent with his cash box full of the miner’s weekly wages.  He nodded in the direction of the saloons.  The girls gave a simultaneous sigh that could be heard all the way back to where the stage sat.  It meant that once again no one, well, no one new, had come to town.  No strangers would be spending their money on the girls, or buying drinks.  The blacksmith turned and went back inside, knowing he too would have no paying customers.  The doors to the shops closed with a thud for the same reason. Meanwhile the sheriff made no movement at all, as if he automatically knew there would be nothing to move for.

Of course, the miners now had money.  Miners always ran to the saloons with their weekly wages burning holes in their pants pockets. They would pour the money out on the tables faster than the bartender could pour the drinks that they demanded, in unison. Will had discovered that there were at least four saloons in the tiny town.  Tonight they would be full of shouting, music, and the sound of cardboard playing cards hitting the table. Every miner in town would be out, even the superintendent.  Although he never drank, he could always be seen leaning against the bar peering out into the crowd for anyone needing a little assistance getting back to the broken down old Jack Creek hotel.  The hotel was conveniently located at the mine’s entrance and had been put into service as a bunkhouse for the miners the first day of the silver strike.  Most of the miners were single men, so the superintendent begrudgingly became 'caretaker' for most of them.  William Warren naturally was the lone exception, as he dutifully returned each night to the room in town that he had rented and shared with his son.

He would occasionally stop and peer over the swinging wooden doors of the saloon next door.  If any of the miners inside recognized him, he would return their nod.  However, their invitations to come in, fell on deaf ears, as William Warren had far greater plans for his meager salary.



© 2014 Dale


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Dale
This is the first chapter of my first novel.

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Good story so far. I had to think twice to understand why Will knew Andy. Maybe it's just me. I guessed Will knew Andy from the trip in to Toole City. Maybe you could add a couple sentences about this.

I also wondered why the saloons and stores were disappointed about no new arrivals when all the miners were getting payed. It seems it wouldn't make much difference if a few new people showed up in town.

Other than that, I like the story and am left with anticipation about William's plans for the future. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. I think there's room in an old west story for lots of different things to happen, given it's the wild west. I'll be back!






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10 Years Ago

I just posted chapter two, hopefully this clarifies how Will knew Andy. What I was hoping to convey.. read more

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I am a "wannabe" writer. I'm working on my very first novel, plus I have done several short pieces and some poetry. I have yet to have anything published. Naturally, that is my goal. I recently retire.. more..

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