Help

I get lost at times

feelings of being alone

not knowing where to go

taking ounces and lines

numbing the pain

in my head runs a train

and I say I'm fine

dying on the inside 

but I finally see the light

no more dayless night

Author's Note

ignore grammer, give me some good feedback so i can learn

Reviews

[Luke Wilson]

I have yet to understand the depth in which I will write, but this is my first poem I've shared besides to myself.