My disguise of smoke

As  the smoke takes me to a place
I feel like ice on a lake
not quite strong
but I seem to have fooled
the ones who skate across my face
on the surface I look indestructible
but I fear the break and
Flinch at the thought of
someone catching a glimpse
through my disguise 

Reviews

[zainul]

I am amazed by the unique idea of disguise of smoke.
This is very interesting.
Enjoyed reading.

[Gloria]

Thank you so much and thank you for reading ! :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome.:)