In my Shadow

Sometimes I feel like I'm living my life on the other side of the curtain

 I'm closed off kept in and my only glimpse of the world is when the wind blows

 and I see just for a second what its like to be alive and feel the sun 

then I'm slammed back away from the world I wish to know.

 Unseen unheard and terrified of the truth am I invisible to you

 do you see my pain for the first time I feel and I don't know what to do

 so I drowned in It wont you help do you only pretend I am not there 

and watch as I lay dying what more can I do what more can I give 

 no this time I will dive in I will fight and drag my self to the top 

 and never again fall because falling it only caused pain but before I let you go

 Make me feel something that lets me know that

 I didn't only cry for pain but for temporary bliss.

Reviews

[Tom Rouse]

The pain of an unloving lover can be the hardest thing we have to endure. You hear them say the right things but their actions belie the truth. You made it through and that is to be commended! Good job again.

[Gloria]

Yes it was and I am glad that I know others understand it takes a lot out of you when you feel like your the only one

[De 'Anthony Subban II]

nice keep it up

[Gloria]

thank you and I plan to

[Gloria]

Tell me you have never felt invisable.

[Petra Vlah]

We all feel invisible at times, but remember the wind and the sun; crying for bliss is a blessing you should celebrate

[Gloria]

yes it is thank you :)