Shooting Stars

My tears traced your collarbones today

And as I was watching them fall

They looked like little shooting stars

If I could have wished upon them

Maybe

Maybe we’d finally be happy

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

This reminded me of the final moments of a relationship after two people have realized how broken they've really become and made each other. Very powerful words and imagery you portray. We all have our wishes and hopes. Love is no fairytale...but we all must make the best of it.

[Sanjh]

Wow!!! short and powerful...

[Dakota Jean]

Thank you!!

[Sanjh]

welcome...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

beautiful!!
maybe, loose one of the maybes, just maybe.
compact and effective!!
lovely emotional poem.
i liked it!!!
:)

[Dakota Jean]

Thank you so much (:

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!! :) :)