Your Beauty

The Truth of beauty In my perspective.

Your laugh is still in my ear,

Your sight is what I admire,

Your voice is so sweet I hear,

Your face is in my thought so clear,

Your spirit is flowing in my air,

Your love what I live with, no fear.

 

Stop drawing the nature,

Your beauty is in that painter's picture,

Stop seeing the mirror,

Your beauty is in the eye of the beholder,

Stop worrying about other,

Your behaviors are all very proper,

Stop putting a makeup on your skin exterior,

Your beauty sparkles as a gem in your interior,

Stop looking the light up in the sky,

Your beauty shines brightly as a star.

  

Feeling your beauty at the dawn of day,

Trying to write the best words I ever say,

Looking for a child's joy on his birthday,

Spending my time with you at the sunset on Saturday,

Driving a yacht in the peaceful bluest ocean on holiday,

Listening the birds in the greenest forest every day.

 

My head lay on that pillow quietly,

Staring into your eyes so deeply,

Drawing to your deeds that are so truly,

Trapping to your facial features absolutely,

Keeping your vivacious soul beside me so closely,

Focusing on all aspects of your details deliberately,

Knowing that all your constitutes, your skin, your color,...  is uniquely,

Learning that, your silence embraced me tightly.

 

Loving your soul and your body altogether honesty,

Making me feel at home, your presence gave me serenity,

Forgotten the fake models in the magazine, mesmerizing by your simplicity,

Letting me know how I could be free of your all captivity,

Bowing down to the God's creator of His gift of beauty,

Embedding in all things on the Earth and the heavens of His creativity.

 

Your beauty doesn't age, even though you die,

Your beauty is the most exquisite, although your hair turns gray,

Your beauty is cheerful by far, indefinitely shy.

 Your beauty is your left deeds float in the eternal sky.

Reviews

[Chris]

Love flavors all of our existence and fills our future. There are times our flaws enhance the emotional impact of what we write and how we mean to speak our thoughts.

[abderrahmane dakir]

Good beautiful.It's so beautiful poem thank for this piece.

[andrew mitchell]

Adoration and love in its finest form

[ANTO]

So many loving sentiments here Dakir.
The line: "Learning that, your silence embraced me tightly." - really appealed to me.
Beauty begets serenity. Beautiful words.

[Rawice]

I am no expert when it comes to poetry. I like your poem snd have had the same thoughts.
Some of it was a little long. I find editing or second writes helps thin out the reading.

[Laura Almeida]

Very romantic writting.. So heartfelt. Cheers !
The only thing I would say is that some of the rhymes made the sentences too long, but that is only my personal taste talking.
I think you did a great job, and I will follow your work.

[Southern_Writes]

I would turn grey to white, but other than that, this is a beautiful piece. Very well done.

[unfathomd]

honestly amazing art :D that was a beauty :D

[terry smith]

true beauty needs nothing to shine...and be admired...nice writing from your heart!!

[anonymousprankt]

like that each n every single word crafted with the beauty; that holds the thought of individual's to focus on serenity & the let quickly switch over the mind to the tranquil state...... Literally a 'Beautiful Poem'...... Pleased to meet a great writer Sir!