Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[RomaJ]

That is one magnificent smile. I enjoyed the flow in your poem. Well done.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much RomaJ.

[James O'Rourke]

Good write.

Your thoughts are well organized in this piece. A simple smile can do so many things. It is a universal thing that anyone can easily recognize and understand in a multitude of ways. The language was very creative as well. Your word choice was clearly a focal point and definitely drove home the emotion you intended for this piece.

Thanks for sharing your work! I look forward to reading more!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much James.

[Anthony J]

Pleasant read. Very simplistic message that isn't hard to relate to. keep writing!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Anthony.

[Sydney]

Amazing how another person can have such great effects of us. The romantic spirit in this is enchanting, a few. If i may address the line "To increase spontaneously my faith" - I think spontaneity would work better.

[Satan]

Nothing like a smile to fuel a fire :)

[Lavender Soya]

Hey there, I've read it from start to finish. I could say, your idea flows well and you have put a palpable emotion wherein you can sense truth in it. Poems, do not necessarily rhyme and this work is a concrete example of that. Moreover, the elements of your poem surely agreed with each other. Keep on writing and never forget to aim for improvement. :-)