Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[luvs2write]

Smile...such a simple concept, but it could mean the world to someone. Beautiful poem, I really enjoyed the free flowing rhythm. Great work..=)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thanks so much for reading and your wonderful comment.

[Trisha Roy]

Beautiful...

Would you like to go through my poem ' A Shadow Over Me' ? Thanks.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Trisha Roy.

[W R Stowe]

I privately messaged you the edits you should do this is a nice free flowing poem and describes all the benefits we receive from something as simple as a smile nice job

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank You for the edits. I'm gratful. Thank you so much WR Stowe.

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

[Elisa]

The power in this poem is its simplicity. You tell things like it is; you're telling the subject exactly how you feel. I thought the inversion of the sentences was interesting, and the rhyme scheme added to the effortlessness and simplicity. Wonderful!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading. Your comment is so wonderful.

[Mayank]

This is a very nice lighthearted poetry, there's always one person who is there to make us smile. I liked rhyming words here and I wish you the best, never let go of that smile.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Mayank.

[sapna sagar]

your poem has the ability to make anyone smile...good work

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Sapna Sagar.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, this is a really great piece of poetry:) yeah, a smile, especialy, the smile of a loved one can do wonders. You did a great job with this poem. Rating it 100#

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you son much.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome:) I'll read/review your book "The soul owner" when i have the time to read it. I know you asked me to review it a long time ago but I've been busy.

[Beccy]

So agree with your sentiment. The power of a smile is immeasurable, it can do all you say and more.

The world should smile more often.

Beccy.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Beccy.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A smile can do wonders. You describe it perfectly in your poem. Well done and thank you for sharing, Abderrahmane. :) Rudi

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Rudi.

[SarahFC]

I like the rhyming pattern in the poem and I think the words flow really well. Sorry but I don't really use this account as often and I've moved to another website.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much SarahFC.