Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Alice Thompson]

I think the most touching line in the poem is 'to efficiently do my best', as it seems to not only address the smiler's effect on the subject but also how the subject will forever treat the smiler. To me it also exudes a boyish energy that comes with hope'. I do recognise that this quite a personal reading on it, but hey maybe they can help too. I was a positive and open poem.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Azat Ruziev]

The smile has a big power. Some sad people don't like others who are always smiling. If you have a power to smile despite life challenges you will have a big success

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Workvio]

Not sure why you wished for me to read this poem, for I am no expert, but I can give my heart's sense of what I read, and what I read was very good ... Very nicely done ... This piece is very thought provoking, and speaks directly to the heart ...

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Workvio]

For what? You wrote the excellent poem, not me ...

[Workvio]

Got your e-mail this morning my friend ... I have already reviewed this lovely poem and can think of nothing better to say, but I did forget to add it to my favorites list, and will take care of that error right now ...

[Dara]

Very powerful and emotionally charged. It seems you have a beautiful person in your life in which to be inspired by.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

In my life I find the beauty anywhere. The beautiful soul gives us a wonderful smile.

[Ashadan]

Your smile allows me
To immediately take a while to rest
To efficiency do my best
To confidently stand on my feet
To brightly achieve my feat
To bravely face my fate
To spontaneously increase my faith
To definitely forget my defeat
To have will power I never felt

I like the ending paragraph. Excellent write-up. Thanks for sharing

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[New Theory]

Good write, the end came too fast, the poem began with grace and paced to an end. Good one, I would had loved to read more.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading and your comment purse me to write more.

[New Theory]

Sure, you are welcome :)

[Misty Blue Eyes]

A smile is so powerful, it can make someone so happy

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[SecretAgentBriBri]

Rhyme scheme is really good and it is a really touching poem. Nicely done :D

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Barbz]

The smile is so powerful. It can satisfy relationships, ease pain, motivate without words, urge, motivate and express approval. I call it emotional bonding. I smiled at the ease of your expression, and look forward to more positivity. A smile is like a yawn.....you always get one back!! Barbz

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Barbz for reading and your wonderful comment.

[Barbz]

Smiling!!😄

[Yasmin Moukarim]

Smile...beautiful poem. Must mean the world to you. Love the rhymes. Simply beautiful

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Yasmin for reading and your wonderful comment.