Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Cara]

a very nice and beautiful poem, gives hope and happiness, thank you for sharing

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Angie G]

Beautiful writing and truly heartfelt. A smile is so simple, costs nothing and gives so much. Lovely!!!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Lola_Bee]

so well written, deep and beautiful. it's definitely an epitome of falling inlove

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[james_cooper]

Nice, romantic, clean, flowing, fresh, inspiring :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Avontia's Guardians]

Let's just say that if this poem was addressed to me I'd instantly fall in love. Enough to make anyone feel special! Absolutely beautiful!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Jen]

This is beautiful! It flows well and the content is romantic. The words you chose for expression are well placed, this is simply a lovely writing! Thank you for sharing.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Lucas C. M.]

I found it beautiful beyond belief. It was a good read, it's pace made me keep reading though a few words could have substitutes. It is a great poem and I honestly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Diana]

Your smile changes
My loneness to togetherness
My sadness to happiness
My weaknesses to strengths
My weariness to willingness
My selfishness to selflessness- one of my favorite stances. I really enjoyed your use of parallel structure/repetition in this stanza. It really helped drive the transformation of the smile...

Great poem. You took a simple concept and transformed it completely.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Mr. Revan]

maybe im feeling nostalgic, but i remember feeling this way once.

its not a positive memory.

and part of me wants to say this poem could be more complex, but then again, i remember not feeling complex and articulated when a smile made me light up.

sometimes simplicity is bliss.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much