Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[cloakedone]

very romantic and emtional..its open and light .i comend you.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[cloakedone]

sure ,who are you

[untimely stories]

a very well done heartwarming poem....its a great poem to read :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Jennesis]

There is nothing like a smile that shows us the truth of a person and warms us from the inside. Lovely.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[DoctorX]

Oh my Aphrodite..
This is so precious,love. I really couldn't help smiling while reading this, you do have a nice rhythm going on.
Although, you did show more show then tell however you have placed emphasis so nicely, I really felt the power of your words. Just reading this felt a like. Refreshing breeze under the spring sun,it really is a marvelous poem, please keep up the great work. Whoever you had in mind while writing this, must be one heck of a special person. :3

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[DoctorX]

You're welcome

[Amy Rose]

Beautiful. Reading this poem gives you kind of a relaxed feeling.. but at the same time you feel energetic and happy. I can't express my feelings towards this poem. I'm speechless. This made my day, thank you. :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[little bad puppy]

Sigh. That is a very sweet poem. It's like cuddling with that special someone under a blanket on a cold day. Like kittens chasing daddy lions fluff. Very nice.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Miles W.]

A very nice piece of work that shows the inner thoughts of someone who finds the good in every day through somebody they care about. Well done sir!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

A lovely poem. You've done a really great job by expressing all that just a simple, single smile can make a person feel or do. Wondefully written! :)

Your smile spurs
My senses mesmerized
My issues solved
My thought relaxed
I liked the direct way you began by telling how someone's smile affects you. I just wondered however whether it shouldn't be ''thoughts relaxed'' instead of ''thought relaxed''.

Your smile helps me
To seek my desire in discovery
To improve my essay to story
To find my love in poetry
These lines are so, so, so beautiful. Hats off! :)

Your smile changes
My loneness to togetherness
My sadness to happiness
My weaknesses to strengths
My weariness to willingness
My selfishness to selflessness
Great thoughts and pure emotions expressed nicely. :)

Your smile allows me
To immediately take a while to rest
To efficiency do my best
To confidently stand on my feet
To brightly achieve my feat
To bravely face my fate
To spontaneously increase my faith
I think you've accidentally written ''efficiency'' here instead of ''efficiently''. The power of a smile has been depicted very well. Nice work! :)

To definitely forget my defeat
I liked the way you put ''definitely'' here as it emphasises the meaning greatly. Excellent coice of words forming a brilliant line. :)
To have will power I never felt
A great line to end the poem on. You credit the smile well and truly with this line. The poem is really, really good and the expressions are amazing. Keep writing! :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much. I corrected Two words. Thoughts and efficiently. Thanks you.

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

You're welcome! :)

[Rajat malik]

Rightly so....sometimes the smile of someone special matters to us a lot, in fact for their smile we do everything coz they are the which makes us happy too......#Loved it #Showing the reality

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much

[Rajat malik]

My pleasure