Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Nyu]

Thanks for sharing this with me, it was very uplifting and actually got me to smile while reading it. Definitely a success. Why? Because you stuck with your ideas and stayed with your heart and that shone through. You didn't even need any punctuation, your own form was powerful enough to get the meaning across.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Michelle Coleman]

Oh wow. Beautifully written. I think we would all want to have a poem like written about the healing power of our smiles.

"Your smile helps me to seek my desire in discover to improve my essay to story to find my love in poetry."

The power of this poem places a smile on my own face, helping me to forget for a time my own stresses of the day.

Thank you so much for sharing this work with me. 😄

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Michelle Coleman]

You are welcome. 😊

[@juliza]

Nicely written! The phrases flow wonderfully and I enjoyed reading it! Very good!

[Konigin]

I really enjoyed your piece. :) The pace was good and this one on had minor errors!! You are improving!!!! :D YAY!!! Keep on writing my friend!!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Konigin]

You're welcome!!!

[Noting Society]

personally i dont like poems that are repetitive but the poem itself is quite good.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Akira Kodama]

I like this piece for the heartfelt feeling it gives me, however it feels bland. I would suggest using more colorful language. I see some spelling errors, I think. Unless you intended to spell things those ways.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Elan Vital 23]

A smile can reflect so much inner beauty. When we smile upon each other we lend strength and solace.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[felioness]

Very positive...I loved the word choices and message. Nicely done! I have one suggestion ... the ending line should have an aha! moment, especially with this kind of uplifting motivational write.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Devanshu Rajput]

It really is a rare sight to read a poem, recently posted and have got almost 80 review! You have achieved a great feat.

A very appealing piece of write. I may like to commend on the way of execution of the poem. The reflections you have inserted in the poem, is really very nice.

Other than me, you have already got so many reviews. So, you don't need mine. There are more good writers than me(To be honest, I am nothing).

Thanks for sharing this piece of poetry.

Cheers,
Devanshu

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.I always need to your advice.

[Chirag Kumar]

a great piece of work. The only thing to follow is limit the statements which will make this even more better :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.