Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Zachary]

A very positive poem about love and one that rings true of new love. Perhaps an idea to add in to it how the emotions you describe affect you physically, in that they give you butterflies or a knot in the stomach. A very well thought out and put together piece with some lovely passages.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Mitali Shah]

good one, its a with unique way of expressing thoughts

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Saddam]

So warm and beautiful. Love this a lot.

Your smile changes my
Loneliness to togetherness
Sadness to happiness
Weaknesses to strengths
Weariness to willingness
Selfishness to selflessness

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[David Jae]

I like this. It's full of hope.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[andrew mitchell]

A delight to read , uplifting and a joy

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much. Your beatiful soul gives us your wonderful smile.

[writing mojo]

a charge of inspiration for the gleaming muse in mass sweet tooth effectiveness...good piece

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[xbxbzdvdsv]

I liked your poem, Your grammar is different from anything i've ever read its unique.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

I love reading poems about new love. It makes one's heart soar!

Alisa😍

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and beautiful words. Love should make us content and smile. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

I update it yesterday.Now I think is last vesrion.

[Country Girl47]

Beautifully penned! The way you describe your emotions by seeing her smile was wonderful.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.