Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[luviva]

#yoursmile. this is a great and refreshing life. we all been hearing about how "a smile goes a long way, you brought it to life!" well penned and it does inspire me to keep on smiling, and all the people out there because you never know what a smile means to someone.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[ANTO]

We are very lucky to meet people who merely have to smile to induce all this good feeling. We do of course in our parents because theres was the first smile we ever saw but to find it in someone that was erstwhile a stranger is a true blessing in Life.
I had these feelings once brought on by someones presence and their smile. Thank you for reminding me of the power of a smile dear poet. This is a banner and should be held high.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[crestoothpaste]

i loved it! keep up the good work!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[crestoothpaste]

no problem!

[SmittyJas]

This poem changes every thing a whole new outlook into the life and stress and all that is around it goes away with smoothness of this writing here what I read is the words of success of relieving stress. Nice works here.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Not here]

In the second stanza thing, it says "read my books in library" and is that supposed to be the library? other than that, i really liked it, and i thought it had alot of really good imagery. it seemed like in some ways it was comparing "your smile" to everything else in life and how it makes you feel.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much. I corrected The library. Thanks for your wonderful comment.

[Ayank Chourasia]

I liked the concept...first intro didn't seem to be doing justice to rest it was awesome

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[BL]

The person you are talking about must be a real big source of inspiration to you. They seem to instill superpowers in you, I found this most uplifting.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Maumil Mehraj]

It is lovely to read a poem about love which is so positive...warm and it sort of lifts you up...
good work!
Maumil

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[anne]

Your smile helps me to
Follow my passion of discovery
Seek my desire in priceless treasury
Read my books in library
Improve my skills in exploratory
Expand my essay to a weel-read story
Find my love poetry........
beautifully optimistic..

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Country Girl46]

You're welcome

[alf]

Yes, yes, yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My only suggestion now, is exploratory. That tense of the word doesn't really fit the rest of the poem. Exploration would, but doesn't fit the rhyme scheme. So maybe change the word OR add another? But yes, you have improved this read by about 75%, so well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! alf

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much. I'll do it.