Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Ansley Authentic]

Delightful read captivated by the motivational tendcy aswell the wealth concerning a dazzling smile I'll post this poem on my Facebook Timeline,Search www.facebook.com/ansley.howe.7

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[chandlerl]

That must be a really, really nice smile. I thought it was good. There wasn't a lot of imagery in it, but there were many character flaws and you did well on finding their opposites. My favorite was selfishness to selflessness because that is a character defect that really encompasses the human race as a whole. It was a sweet poem. I truly wish a smile was enough to do all this.
Thank you for the read.
-CBL

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading. Your comment is wonderful.

[W R Stowe]

I see you have revised this piece and the addition is well pned and very effective couplets nice job

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading.

[W R Stowe]

you are welcome

[usman]

i really like this poem,but the way of expression should be a little more simplified

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading.

[Liyingbeni Humtsoe]

This is really good! It has a lot of emotion and it definitely makes a lot of sense! As for criticism, I don't have any. It is a very meaningful poem.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading.

[blue cave]

wow...this really took flight
bravo

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading.

[J.A. Marquez]

The words flow like a stream, bubbling with delight. I found that I couldn't help myself - I had to smile. If only people knew what something as simple as a grin can do to brighten another person's day. Truly, just the stretching of the lips, a glimpse of friendly teeth. It is a gesture of solidarity. It is a declaration of empathy. This was worded in such an empowered and encouraging way. Thank you for sharing this wisdom.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much for reading. Your comment is wonderful.

[Gaston Villanueva]

The tone is very positive and I like how almost everyone can relate to the message

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Bluefire]

This is pretty great, I like tne ideas. Also the rhyme and rythm which keep pace up until the very end. Well done!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Bluefire]

No problemz

[An owl on the moon]

Your words express the pure joy of that one smile that can wash away all the darkness and pain of our heart... I know a smile like this... and your poem so perfectly sets this happiness on fire...

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.