Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[SuperGirl]

It's amazing. Keep up good work!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[SuperGirl]

welcome. wanna be friends?

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Last line of second stanza I feel is missing a syllable. Maybe could be Find our (own) love poetry.
I find it says so much in each line that I was reading it a bit too fast, possibly a few commas to slow the reader down and to emphasise some of the points. I never imagined a smile could invoke such a wealth of feelings and emotions.
Really well done.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[creative Marie]

lovely poem about the power of a true smile and impact of lives that a smile can effect.

[M Garcia]

Very nicely written. It flows and reads quite well. Thank you for asking me to read it.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[M Garcia]

Your welcome.

[Lizardo]

The first thing that came into my mind when I saw this was: "Damn, this is really good and very true"
A smile of our special one is just what we need to make us happy on our darkest days, and talking to her, makes us forget about everything behind us.
This is a really good poem, Excellent!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[NeiL ArandA]

This is a good write. Writer should be able to paint a picture with words and not defining the thought further with articulate words. If a picture is worth a thousand words then paint us a picture of what is SMILE mean to you in poetic words.

What I would like to see from this beautiful concept is for the author to " SHOW " us what really smile is and not " TELL " us what smile is about in poetic form ... Hope this helps

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[NeiL ArandA]

You are welcome ..Thank you for the read request.

[Dayran]

This is certainly a definitive list of all that a smile can achieve. Certainly your poem does the same.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[BLACKCRUSH]

I love it ! I wonder who inspired such a wonderful write ? I love the feeling I got after reading this

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.