Your Smile

Your Smile

A Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir
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For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

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Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith

Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

© 2015 Abderrahmane Dakir


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Very good piece, I really enjoyed reading this work. I have two poems that have to do with a smile.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
You can never go wrong with a smile and apparently you can't go wrong with your writing. Beautiful piece and a smile while small carries hope and happiness for those that it is shared with.

As a salesmen I over the years learned you can tell someone most anything and if you smile they are happy even to some less than positive news

Great work and thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
It's a good poem. I do like the structure you gave it. Sorry you PMed me to review this, I'm not the best about reviewing poems.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
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Your poem brings a smile to brighten your day, give you hope. Your images bring to mind how valuable one smile can be; they are contagious!
A suggestion would be to simplify for additional impact. Eliminate My before issues and thought, To before improve and find, last four Mys, and last seven Tos. This allows the first lines to flow with the next lines. See what you think.
It is a lovely poem.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Deep, yet straightforward

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
a smile is worth hundred words. your words worth a hundred smiles. well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

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Beautifully encouraging! It really shows the impact a smile can have on someone :)
good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
the power of a smile is wildly understated. your words encompass some of what a smile can do.
wonderful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
a smile is contagious ,it will spread warmth and love
a beautiful write and idea

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
This is so beautiful and lovely, I really liked it and I wish the everyone, who is expecting my smile in their life would return as soon as possible lol.....
It is that a smile can heal you from all the worries and be an inspiration so so beautiful thanks for sharing...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Abderrahmane Dakir

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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Added on April 30, 2015
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Abderrahmane Dakir
Abderrahmane Dakir

casablanca, Morocco



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