It's story about how we love learning new things in our life. I'm learning , I'm alive...
I started my training in Computer Company as soon as I
graduated from university. I focused on my work. I met in this company two
senior engineers who gained many years of experience. They gave answers to
most of my questions. All at first,I
asked many questions as why this script worked in that way? How make a script
source to make a difference?
I collected information about my customers’ needs so also i organized it in
order to make a map that show all process.
In addition, i used a source script to make forms,
edit them and print them.
After three months, i accomplished my assignment, my
boss and my customers were satisfied.
As soon as my boss liked to hire me, I already received a call from my best
friend who wanted to be my co-worker in a new company of web designer.
My new boss was a big geek, he was a respected man. My proudest day was the
first day i put my feet in his company. I was the luckiest young man in the
world. He gave me the best position. I was a leader in my team. I was project
manager. I never forgot him. I’m grateful for his help.
Internet was hardly known in 1998. I strongly believed
in it. I studied very hard, i read recent books, no matter the price, I didn't
save money, I bought two or three books a week. i didn't care about a time i cared about how i could adapt myskills acquisitions with new projects.
One of the things that i enjoyed to do more than
anything else is learning new things. I wanted to keep learning. I wanted to
keep growing.
I always prefer to takerisks. I’d rather work on new ideas. my
life’s dream is to understand the newest technology on my projects.
Later, we committed to a big project, it was very
interesting, we worked deeply together. my assignment was focused on software
solution that gave any person the best websites of shopping, sports, news,
travel, rent cars, real estate agency....
Another team were focused on hardware solution that having internet on TV with
wireless keyboard and small box through phone line.
The reporters of second channel were come in our
company to explain on air our project. We had a great job.
Being successful in this field, we shouldhave a good eyesight, and quick reflexes.
One the best way to improve that job is learning intelligently and efficiently.
Don’t accept failure, try again, again…
Great story telling. This did justice in the realm of getting the message across. Great message. There's lot of times where a story can have a great message to aim for, and have a lot of under lining things but then no one gets it, and if no one gets it, then the point has failed. But in my opinion this did well to get the message across. You made it clear, which is why I think it's good. Keep up the good work. What was also great was that I could imagine the story as I read it, and that is also a strong point of stories. The ability to have the reader imagine it because after all we're reading not watching it, but it was as if I was there as I read this, and that is great. Great visuals and great story telling. It had plot and substance. When you add substance to writing it gets that much better. It gets the reader hooked on it and make them feel as if they are part of it. As long as their is that emotional connection between the reader and the story then it's good. The connection you were able to established in the writing gives the reader a sense of comfortably that they are in tune with the writing. So that way when the writing is over, the reader wants more, and wishes it didn't end. I feel the same way when I watched a movie or tv series that I get so attached to, I never want it to end. And for this writing, I didn't want it to end. You had me hooked, and I am sure everyone else who read it was hooked as well. That is good, that is what you want for people to keep wanting more. The way you put the story together makes me feel like my life is different for that moment in which I read your story. I love it, and it was beautiful. Just keep posting stories like this, and you'll have a good following.
I found the process or your road to success very interesting and informative although I stumbled on some of your grammar usage, I took into consideration that you are from a different country and it is fascinating in itself to find someone who even desired to speak and write English. You have done well and I am certain, that in time, if you continue to write but also put in great emphasis on reading so you will see how sentences are structured, then you cannot help but learn.
Agree. The characteristic of a loser is how easily they get discouraged and give up. Watch a child learn how to walk. When they fall, they get up and continue. No self-pity just a will. Living in the present is the secret of children and animals.
I agree.
"One the best way to improve that job is learning intelligently and efficiently.
Don’t accept failure, try again, again…"
If you fall down. Learn from the mistake and become wiser and don't repeat. I like you story and wisdom shared. Thank you for sharing the very good story.
Coyote
Hello there. Thanks for inviting me to look this over and share my opinion. Thanks as well for sharing your journey. I have a little understanding about where you are coming from with this. Risk. Passion. Drive. The complete and utter compulsion to be better at what you want to do in life, the excitement of seeing yourself actually GET better, and then the reward of seeing where it's gotten you. Of course, definitions of success vary, but that's not really the point.
I will say this. I would like to see more of you in the story, not just your actions. If this is a road map, I would love to see the commentary from the drive taken whilst going along that map.
For instance. "All at first, I asked many questions as why this script worked in that way? How make a script source to make a difference?" I would have been interested to hear more of your questions. I would have liked to heard the reactions. I would have liked to hear your voice in this. Not all writing has to do this, mind you. It's a personal preference.
And just a technical note, I would suggest being a little more careful about proofreading and editing your work. You have most of what you need here, it just needs a little fine tuning. Believe me sir, I reread everything I do at least four times, editing and rewriting frequently before I ever consider showing it to anyone. ( Anyone at all. I am a freak about it.) All that and I still find problems in everything I write. No one is perfect.
I am glad you wrote this. I love your drive and your experimentation, and your need to put this out there. well done, sir, and best of luck with everything you do.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I have to thank you Brandon Wesley Mckay very much, i learn alot about your comment, it's the best a.. read moreI have to thank you Brandon Wesley Mckay very much, i learn alot about your comment, it's the best advise to edit our work many times before. Thank you
I am impressed of how successful you have been. You were lucky to start out at a young age and to have a boss you can work with that's enjoyable to be around.
Thank you for inviting me to look on this promising piece. I’d like to be honest with you that my grammar is not at its best so I shy away from giving suggestions on that aspect. May I suggest that you double check the consistencies of your tenses. The substance/your material is good; however, you need to be very careful in the presentation of your ideas. I feel that it's a bit disorganized. But please know that the message you want to impart is very inspiring and encouraging. Keep on writing, my friend.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Gabrielle if you could review me my second story, i need your opinion, Thank you very much
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