Black Rose

love is pointless

The world around me

Is so happy

I am crushed

Because of the black rose

It haunts me

 

As he gave it to her I weeped inside

Trying to hide the feeling of my mind

I want to escape to die

why was I so stupid

But still the black rose infects my mind

 

I see nothing but the rose

It is haunting me to the very depts of my soul

Hoping to get back the person that makes me whole

But as I learned the word was just a lie

My friends already told me but I failed to believe

 

That she was like the black rose

She is cold and uncaring

And has left me again for

That guy I used to call my friend

The black rose continues to haunt me

 

But at least now my heart see's clearly.

Author's Note

love is just a word and the world serches but can never find, but love is just a worthless emotion.

Reviews

[Tara Ghorm]

Oh! Now I know who this is about!

You were really hurt...

Love isn't just a word, dear. You find out what it means. Maybe with me, maybe not. But you're my friend and I'll be cheering you on the whole time!

((Not much of a review, huh?))

[ebur™]

creative with the colors, intriguing poem, and very deep. good job with this poem. well done! :)

[Emily?]

Omg I absolutely love this poem! fantastic work! Great Job!=)

[Jacqueline]

I liked the effect you created with the colors
How it started out red until you eventually see things in gray, or somewhere in between black and white.

I really enjoyed reading this.
Great job.

[~LeeAnn~]

Interesting...but wonderful

[Magdelena]

Deep, penertrating and so profound. Your meaning came across loud and clear. Love is pain, yet to listen when one tells us differemnt, sometimes it takes the road for us to travel to learn its lessons..

Well done..

Mag xx

[Cassandra D.]

Wow.
This was a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading this.

[MarkGMelvin]

wow very deep man this is cool

peace
wmmelvin

[Alya Usman]

Hmm... this is pretty good. The theme is conveyed quite beautifully. =)

[...MysteryGirl...]

Wow... this is one amazing write...
One of the best i could ...no... this IS your best write ever..
Great Job...
Keep on Writing :)