Shadows of a soul

As I Look into the mirror

As I look at myself

I cant help but think

I myself have no soul just shadows

the shadows are my thoughts

My shadows have a mind of there own

They attack at will

I cant stop them once my anger has reached a point

I am going crazy

I dont know what is real or fake

But I Know That My Soul Is No Longer There But Is Taken Over By Shadows

Reviews

[CircusNerd]

minor grammar errors, but I can feel the emotions of "said person" (lol) without your use of extreme imagery to touch my senses. this worthless feeling of being conquered without resistance. fantabulous job :-)

[Flo]

hmmm, Very good construction, I liked how you described everything with a sense of darkness, got me a bit inspired, good job!
-Flo

[Lunar Pup]

This piece is really good... Anger is a very bad thing expecially when it's uncontrolable... But I like how you say your soul has been taken over by shadows it's very unique.