Who am i

I am who

who am I

I live in darkness

but I am continuosly serching for light

I am niether good nor evil

I want evil destroyed

But as I am in darkness there is no good

I want to become very powerful so that no one will think of sayin anything against me

 i have set some of the shards of my heart into my characters

Taro

Rin

Geki

Tetsuya

Takeo

Akio

Naomi

Katsuya

All those are my characters, shardes of my heart but who am I like the most

I am not ever the good guy I have hurt the person I love to many times to count

So does that make me the evil in the story am i like my father

and still after this poem who am I 

Author's Note

My bitch ass father left me and my mother when I was to young, I vowed to never be like him or even speak his name.

Reviews

[Lunar Pup]

It's a very good piece... And I'm truely sorry about your father... Some people do not have hearts in my oppinion thus they do not care... I have a father who I left behind because all he did was twist words around my heart and make me hate people who did not deserve my hatred... And if you belive that you can never be like your dad it will happen you just have to belive.

[Sseoni]

I can totally understand what you're talking about. The same thing happened to me... wonderful poem! It was beautifully written, and very emotional! I loved it! :D

[...MysteryGirl...]

good poem..
And for your father, i'm sorry.
We have something in comon.
I vowed to never be like my mom
and you vowed to never be like your dad..
But good write.