splitpersonality

I know I am crazy but I'm not really crazy.

I feel two people inside me

I'm sure I'm not crazy

But their is a section between the two people

Sometimes I am me and some times I cange

Somehow I feel different people

One the Hatefull darkness

The other kind and loving

But I have caged the love

Threw That part of Me away

So Now I'm jut Hatefull and lost in Darkness

Taro won

Author's Note

do you know what I'm talking about?

Reviews

[Ryosei Takashi Hime]

Oh, yes. I certainly understand. I just felt a third come alive in me yesterday. I've always been wary of putting such feelings into words, because I've been threatened with a mental hospital before. I'm crazy, but I'm not, so I don't want to be trapped in a mental institute. Ya know? o__O;

[Lunar Pup]

I can understand it perfectly... I like how its worded it has a very nice flow...

[Fanciful Goddess]

AMAZING ONCE AGAIN!!!!!! KEEP IT UP

[Mandi]

cool poem. I think you're writing what lots of people feel that are just too afraid to admit it. encluding me but i have no problem admitting it...i feel sometimes like my body is controled by someone else. I know what you mean....check your spelling though.

[karmic]

Yea i know what you're talking about, I have seven people in me or maybe they're just masks . Also you spelled change wrong twice, but other then that great job.