I always wondered
if I would ever meet someone who would truly love me for who I am, without all
that jazz. How am I to know who really loves me once I am out into this
materialistic world of dissections and judgements? How would I ever know if its
real ? Or even whether its love in the first place? Because I loved once and I
lost. Not him but myself. For what’s worse when love leaves you before you
leave each other.
But amidst all
this mess a higher purpose was busy weaving a love story- the best love story
of two strangers who must have crossed paths so many times on these busy
streets of life, who must have been together at the same place without the
slightest pull of the threads attached, who must have been sitting right next
to each other for months in the same space and time, living moments of finding
a heart as familiar as one another beating across a distance. Everything
building onto a higher purpose, so amused by the show. Pulling the thread just
enough to bring them close ONE Baby STEP at a time till the cloth softly
wrapped them together in a WALK of a mile. And so they met as YOU and ME.
From strangers to
friends to companions walking down the same road where we once walked past each
other and the roads turned to a shore struck by the waves of love at sunset
while the night fell upon us blending the two edges and YOU turned into ME and
I turned into YOU.
And here we are
with the hands that once swung alone now swings together. Hands strong enough
to move the curtain to see through each other from across two countries. And
less did we knew when your night became my day as we used the same thread to
tie the two together in love. From “You are my friend” to “I am your
reflection” , our hearts turned into
mirrors where I no longer saw You and Me but US.
Then you swept me
off my feet and held me as I was about to fall and hugged me tight when I tried to let go. You kept me steady in the waves and
never let me fall except in love with you as we nurtured our passion away. You kept me warm when I shivered. We have seen
our strength fade away, our mind going all over the places , our tears as we
broke down slowly inside and died each night, but we kissed away the pain and
the fury and cradled us to a stronger day as we pulled the cloth on us to grow
together underneath. HE stitched two differences together into a bond oflove. And with our thoughts so
different only to converge into a beautiful reunion.
We were never in
want of love because we were always in need of it. I always knew you somewhere
and you always knew me, what’s left to be known is just US. The most beautiful
purpose being we find ourselves each day through each other. Maybe that’s how
HE wanted us to meet our own self. We fell in love without being told to, without
somebody else trying to, without reasoning, without law but with instinct ,
with a purpose higher than ourselves and with the desire of waking up next to
each other every morning. We are not meant for a wedding; we are meant for a
marriage because we will never complete each other or be our better halves. We
don’t need to complete each other , we just need to make our love complete
irrespective of religion and society. I hope in the ocean of our life we stand
together against every wave crashing through our love , our hands still
swinging together and our hearts still wrapped under that piece of cloth HE
weaved for us because someone once said "
You have done a good job of describing the kind of best friend love relationship most people only long for, but never actually experience. It's refreshing to read about a satisfying relationship, when so many are writing about pain & harshness of life & love. This line is thought-provoking: "We were never in want of love because we were always in need of it." . . . I hope this is a real person in your life & I wish you both the best, if it is (((HUGS)))
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8 Years Ago
Yes! "You and Me" does exist for real and I feel so blessed to have him in my life. Thank you so muc.. read moreYes! "You and Me" does exist for real and I feel so blessed to have him in my life. Thank you so much for this warm feedback. God Bless You! LOVE and HUGS :)
wow!
amazing
commendable
impressive
all these adjectives are merely meant for this creation of yours.
such a deep love, such heartfelt feelings...glad to read this.
beautifully done !
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7 Years Ago
Thank you for such a warm feedback.Glad you liked it :)
You have done a good job of describing the kind of best friend love relationship most people only long for, but never actually experience. It's refreshing to read about a satisfying relationship, when so many are writing about pain & harshness of life & love. This line is thought-provoking: "We were never in want of love because we were always in need of it." . . . I hope this is a real person in your life & I wish you both the best, if it is (((HUGS)))
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Yes! "You and Me" does exist for real and I feel so blessed to have him in my life. Thank you so muc.. read moreYes! "You and Me" does exist for real and I feel so blessed to have him in my life. Thank you so much for this warm feedback. God Bless You! LOVE and HUGS :)
In the book of life, the subject of relationships and love must take up the most pages. You have added your wisdom to life's book that others can understand and learn your lessons with this one, well done Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!
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8 Years Ago
Thanks a bunch for this yet another wonderful feedback :)
i love it,i don't think i could have put it so beautifully, it explained how my husband and i feel about each other, there are almost no words to express about this wondrous piece. thank you so much for your amazing view on love.
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8 Years Ago
I totally love your warm feedback! I am so glad Katt that you liked it to such an extent!
Kee.. read moreI totally love your warm feedback! I am so glad Katt that you liked it to such an extent!
Keep loving each other. God bless you both and ur love :)
Wonderful creation .... loved reading it.... the way you have expressed the love beyond everything .... which does not require marriage nor law to keep it strong.... :) loved reading it
its a beautiful love story ... and like any story, it takes time to grow into each other, you have shown this somewhat metaphorically ... love, marriage, life, they all take commitment as well as give and take, but the overriding them is the higher love that one can attain - lovely piece X
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8 Years Ago
Thanks KWP for your gracious feedback as always .. loved how u added a new dimension to it :)