EMPTY

EMPTY

Until when will I have to bear?

Our love now lies nowhere.

Until when will I keep on dying?

I alone, am left trying...

Why is it so hard to accept?

Why is destiny so cruel?

Why do we have to break apart?

When all I want is you in my heart...

This poem may sound so cheesy,

But it speaks with all sincerity.

Please come back to me

For without you, my life is all empty.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You like to use a lot of question marks in your writes... nothing wrong with that... Just seems much here... Of course, the title is "Empty".... so they add appeal to this one...

[daisyreelorraine]

Yes, really the purpose :)

Thanks!

[emman]

Emotionally written.. I like the way you write coz its simple but goes directly to the heart.. keep writing madam daisy.. and oh..kinsa kaha imong gimingawan?hmmm..blind item na naman!hahahaha :)

[daisyreelorraine]

..wahehe..blind item mulang Emman..LOL! XD btaw.dli pa ba halata nga ikaw? aw.wahahaa..jowkkk :p btaw.salamat sa compliment..i always write from the heart..kinda frustrated lng kai..LOL! :D