If I were a god...

If I were a god...

A Poem by Daisy Moon

“If I were a god…”



Angels would not be

prisoners of this cruel world,

but instead, my friends


Intelligent humans, yes

They would never have to guess

The answers all there 


Living off the land

would be seen as smart and right,

not so primitive 


Actual punishments, si

So brutal villains would flee

No room for evil


There would be no tests

No failing or losing love

True prayers above


You won’t be left to question

Hard times, you won’t need to run

I would be there, always


No book left to read

You will know and you will see

What I need from thee


Love, kindness, understanding

forgiveness and acceptance

All of these you need


They aren’t just for you

But applied to everyone

We must keep the peace


A world that is fair and true

No more depressions, so blue

Worlds full of laughter








© 2022 Daisy Moon


Author's Note

Daisy Moon
Honesty is KEY to becoming the best version of yourself

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"You won’t be left to question
Hard times, you won’t need to run
I would be there, always"

I honestly wish this were reality...surety that the power has put an obstacle before you for a reason and even if they wouldn't confer the reason...their presence might be amazing as you go through the hard times and hopefully emerge stronger with faith not only in yourself but them?

Thanks for this Daisy...made me think!

~M.Babu~

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"You won’t be left to question
Hard times, you won’t need to run
I would be there, always"

I honestly wish this were reality...surety that the power has put an obstacle before you for a reason and even if they wouldn't confer the reason...their presence might be amazing as you go through the hard times and hopefully emerge stronger with faith not only in yourself but them?

Thanks for this Daisy...made me think!

~M.Babu~

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would like your world dear poet. No anger, no war. Just people seeking friendship and loving the gifts of nature. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderfully unique and enjoyable read here Daisy Moon, my favourite lines were “No book left to read
You will know and you will see
What I need from thee“,

Kind regards

Lathen

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Daisy Moon
Daisy Moon

Marietta, GA



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