Hell

More of a poetic observation than anything. I got my inspiration from the anime Soul Eater character Crona. I tried to be Crona when I was writing this piece. I think I did a decent job.

Do you know where the real hell is?
It's in your head.
You cannot escape your mind.
Therefore, you cannot escape hell.
As a human being,
We are doomed to live in hell.
Our demons make us weak.
Our thoughts give us nightmares.
Our breath gives us pain.
Hell is all we know,
All we ever will know.
Hell is all around us.
But most of all, it is inside us.
We make our own hell,
We create our own torture.
Isn't that ironic?

Will we ever escape?
Will we ever stop bleeding?

The answer is no.

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Hell is all know,
all we ever will know.
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Hell is all we know,
all we ever will know.
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You put a different take at Hell...is in the confines of your mind...imaginative way to look at it...

[Music For The Wounded Soul]

Thank you for the review. I will fix the error as soon as possible.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Just caught my eye...normal...the stuff we all love is editing...