Last Breath

Wishing everyone moments of intoxication :)

I am Nectarious

God of sweetness

words dripping honey on your silken skin

I can float on your tropical breeze

and whisk your soul to the edges of exaltation

I mix delirium and sweet strawberries and spell rapture on your velvety lips

my cantata escapes uncontrollably and I play a rhapsody with your heartbeat

I am inflight on a path to paradise when your angel eyes devour me with ecstasy

I am your fantasy

the flame that ignites a red hot pulse in the striking moonlight

I will be waiting

 captivating your sanity

amongst the amblings of your most lonely nights

my sweet drunken romance soaking your lucid tears

the balmy night scented with your arousing fragrance

touching the landscape of your luscious contours

let me die a thousand deaths

and live a thousand moments of breathless rapture

my darling, my love

I wait yearning, to be seduced 

before my last breath

Reviews

[Chris]

This one is soft and heart-touchingly warm. There IS a tease and a challenge... and the nicest smile.

[Hebe]

Thank you :) love to try different styles of writing !

[Hope]

Its an intoxicating read....:)
Your choice of words bring out the ecstasy....
Great work, Hebe!

[Hebe]

Thank you Naat.... so happy you enjoyed it 😍

[Hope]

My pleasure...

[Hebe]

Thank you ....so glad you enjoyed it :)

[Wórdsmíth]

very sensuous... just like your name: "Hebe" -- such a "Habibi" you are, ma'am. I kinda enjoyed readin' this poesy... and red's as my fav. so yes... it almost aroused me to extreme, but of course, in a very sensible manner. lol

[Tony Jordan]

Who wouldn't want someone to be desired by someone with such pathos. This is full on bodice-ripping stuff and not in a lewd way - done with class Hebe.
Love it!

[Hebe]

Thanks Tony.... appreciate it :)

[Papaya]

Sweet, sensual and romantic write, Hebe.
Well done.

[Hebe]

Hi Ana.. thank you for stopping by :)

[Mamta Sonowal]

nic poem...ur thought is amazing...

[Hebe]

Thank you so much :)

[Mamta Sonowal]

ur welc'me...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

deliciously romantic----such imagery....

j.

[Hebe]

Thank you :) much appreciate

[heartspeaks]

the title brought me here as even i have written a poem titled LAST BREATH. though the context is v.diff. Anyways.. i liked your poem . The words are mesmerising and a poetic bonanza. Great read

[Hebe]

Thank you Heartspeaks for stopping by, so happy you enjoyed it! I will certainly read your version :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem.
"let me die a thousand deaths
and live a thousand moments of breathless rapture
my darling, my love
I wait yearning, to be seduced
before my last breath"
The above lines. Perfect us of temptation. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Hebe]

Thank you John... I was sure you would appreciate it :) I enjoyed writing it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.