Flower Power

10 word contest Please review....thank you :)

I was sitting at the HARVEST Inn Bar
I knew I was not a mere SEEDLING anymore
I was a fully grown SUNFLOWER
my dress was in full bloom
I wanted something special for this FESTIVE occasion, so I went to my favorite boutique 'Fleur-de Paris' and in the changing room which I named the dream CHAMBER I tried on all the latest TANTALIZING and FLAMBOYANT fashions!
it was worth every penny, I chose yellow velvet petals with white brocade trim and green chiffon leaves falling to the ground.....heavenly
This was my first official date with ALABASTER,
he was a strong STURDY Yarrow, a STALLION in the plant ranking!
He hung out in the garden patch next to me, we had been talking for quite some time sharing and laughing together.....
when the weather conditions felt a little harsh, and our petals and leaves weighed down with rain drops and the wind would want to rip out our roots, he would stretch his branches to cover my weak petals and leaves, what a gentle plant he was!
I must admit I was a little nervous!
Suddenly, i looked up and there he was, tall, strong, lean..... this was the moment I had been waiting for!

Reviews

[Hebe]

Thank you so much Mr Lopez your review will be treasured:)

[Mr. Lopez]

Creative beyond just an ordinary writer. I really loved it.

[Hebe]

always great reading your reviews, thanks you!

[Wicahpi]

"Rendezvous in the Garden" LoL That was my first thought. This is an original, for sure. Delightful use of all 10 words! Loved this 'Garden Party'! Thank you for entering the 10 Words I Give contest. Well done.

[Hebe]

Thank you....appreciate your review.

[Paul Bell]

What a great poem. At first i was expecting a date over a drink.
Liked the journey it took.