Butterfly

Ah, to be a butterfly

To soar through the summer sky

As if there is not a worry

In all the world

As if summer will last forever

And the trees no longer change

To move with grace and beauty

And never worry about tomorrow

If only we all could live like this

And coast through life

With the wind under our wings

Reviews

[alyakLala]

why not live our life as butterflys?
yur pome is so sweet and adds hope if yu think about it.

[Liza]

the butterfly is a wonderful source of inspiration when we think of the caterpillar they used to be - i enjoyed this dedication

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Lovely. The butterfly was not always winged; once it was only a worm. But time always changes things; some for better, some for worse. Hoping you find the wind beneath your wings. :o)

[Michael X]

this is lighthearted, peaceful and free, has a vibrance, like that of a cool, yet sunny day, when the air is tranquil and the clouds seem to create shapes
of those things that set the heart into daydreaming bliss, excellent job.

[zombiikillah666]

awh. this is cute. makes me want to frolic threw the wildflowers. (:

[StacyPerry]

A very beautiful write.

[James Johnson]

really beautiful. i wish i could be a butterfly...ha ha. its a good poem so thank you for writing this

[chaffy]

beautiful, although, unlikely to become true.. but our lives can be good too.. butterflies are like flowers. both too delicate.. the write is good and clear, straight to the point. good job!

[Epiphany P. Nickel]

That is really beautiful! It really catches the essence of a butterfly. Extremely well written. Brava!

[Tori Adams]

I enjoyed it :) You caught the perspective of a butterfly well rather than just explaining that you could fly as most poems about butterflies are about. Well done. I applaud you :)